Someone said that this was trying to be deep but that it wasnt deep at all. this bothered me. i am not trying to be deep. or edgy. i am simply letting my thoughts run free.

Something else is that it is confusing. Which I understand. The pacing and all is not ideal I believe. On the other hand you maybe need to think for like a second. My intention was to simply have a dismissive mother and a child that needs to get away.

In my head and technically in the story too. There are no windows or doors except for one. This was on purpose, because to me, there is no way out for the boy. I know no one would catch that. I think I would need to put more emphasis on this fact, make it more obvious. But then again. I don't want to be obvious. I want to be subtle until someone hits the ground